2 NEW Songs In The Works

Wats Up world

So I am currently in the middle of writing to songs one named "Me You And Xstacy" which is about a story of a couple who are both virgins and the male is serenading his significant other to trust him enough with his/her body. And, the other song is "Fly Away" which is about a man who has just been dumped by his significant other who he's been with for awhile and trying to find away to move on from having your heart smashed to being able to pick it back up and move on and find someone new.
So look forward to your feedback and i also i have a poem i would like to share from my GSpoetry page:
physical features
is wat ppl look at today
when i try 2 holla @ somebody
da 90-90 ordeal comes into play
n dat means da first 90 ft n 90 sec.
is how long it takes
a person 2 remember ur face
n dats all it takes for rejection
to show its face
ppl around the world r shallow
da icon image of society
r to b skinny,fit,muscular
n lets not forget da sex lines
i say fuck all dat
y dont u try 2 get 2 kno da person
instead of sayin NEXT
lets take me for example
im 5'4"
short and heavy set
i look somewhere between Biggie,Jezzy n Sean Kingston
im pretty sure if u met me
u would probably say i was
n neva take a second glance
but if u took a chance
n tried 2 get 2 kno me
u would c dat ima very different person
u will find dat im tryna make it big whether its doin music
or ownin my own places
n things of dat nature
n dat my life revolves around music
u could c dat ima deep sensitive person
dat is willin 2 do wat eva fo dat
one special person
if u decided to look within
u will c all da pain n sufferin i hav
endured throughout ma life
c all dat requires baby
is for u to BREAK THE ICE
take a chance on someone n u can c things
dat doesnt seep thru skin
but iz kept deep inside
locked away lik a treasure chest
waiting for someone to take the key n look inside
yea now dats y i say we all r
MORE THAN MEETS THE EYE

OMFG!!!! ABDC IZ LOOKING SO RIGGED RITE NOW

I Cannot believe this how Americas Best Dance Crew gonna eliminate the best crew on the show. Fanny Pak was the shit all up in thru ABDC it now has me thinkin dat there was some other person behind this, because no disrespect to So Real Cru and Supercrew but Fanny Pak smashed the stage last week and this week and both So Real and Super were so mediocre but its all said and done so here is ma tribute to Fanny Pak to say thanks for making my thursday nights worth while.
P.S. Oh and if by any chance Phil, Matt, Beau and Glenda I LOVE YALL TO DEATH HUGS AND KISSES